The road is cold here, like a black river. Our homes drift between walls of steel and stone. The wind comes, and it makes our world shiver. The rain falls, and it soaks through to the bone. Our ferryman calls, guiding souls along; his lone cry sounds like a bell in the night. Fires dwindle, and our ghosts murmur song and soon, even the moon has lost its light. But even in this dark, you are a star whose glow floods the sky with a blaze of fire, stills the gale, catches the rain, heals the scar, and with broad wings, brings us ever higher. In this broken city, you’re all I need. As the world ends, I’ll follow your lead.
So, I've been meaning to make a lighthearted alternate reality Street Devil with the cast as humans. You've heard me ramble.
There are some things I need to establish. First: Plot. Is there a plot? Is it slice-of-life segments, a la Azumanga? (though not as ridiculously so) Second: Title. What the hell am I going to call this? I've had some trouble with it.
Not so important things: Need to make some sort of emblem for Azazel's skate club because I am a nerd and I want to.
A new idea: Azazel of the original story has dreams of his alternate human self, Roark, and vice versa.
Cain has a disease known as toxic multinodular goitre, or Plummer's Disease. His symptoms are mainly tachycardia, weight loss, heat intolerance, irritability, and cases of hyperkinesis.
Tachycardia is the worst of them, as it has lead to ischaemic heart disease. Which, in turn, has worsened. A contributor to it is his smoking. So, in particularly bad situations, Cain's heart doesn't fare too well.
Original: Mains fight Adam's group. Cain breaks ahead to fight Adam. Adam mortally wounds Cain. Azazel and Lilith enter. Azazel flips out, Lilith carries off Cain. Azazel angrily fights Adam, but loses. Lilith has returned, and she kills Adam. They find out Adam intended for Azazel and the others to kill them so that they wouldn't be killed by humans.
Probable ideas for rework: Mains fight Adam's group. Cain breaks ahead to Adam. Cain is severely exhausted, and his heart is failing. Azazel and Lilith enter. Cain dies from a heart attack. Azazel doesn't lose control of his emotions, but you can tell he's trying to be calm. His powers activate, and he fights Adam. Azazel's group does not kill Adam's group.
Ideas I am not sure of: The group possibly arrives with other demons who wait outside. (Very unlikely) Adam protests Azazel's choice not to kill them. Azazel tells him he's a coward, who is afraid of living up to the consequences of his crimes and thinks death is an escape.